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Zifnab
03-06-2006, 09:23 PM
I tend to wax poetic every now and again, and have noticed that I am not alone in this. There have been some very well writen lines in these threads, and so I thought perhaps they should have a place of there own. No Tiger, not dirty limericks, but for those times when the mood hits, a place to let loose the creative side of our personality, that often languishes, locked inside waiting to be free....
Give it a shot and we'll see what happens.

belfast
03-06-2006, 10:03 PM
Well I am not much of a poet so that means no poem.
However there are times when I feel tender and just want to sit with the love of my life in my arms and just tell her how much she means to me...and how much she has changed my world..the happiness she has brought to me..made me appreciate love and all its tenderneess..just look in her eyes and see the love

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:04 PM
Well I am not much of a poet so that means no poem.
However there are times when I feel tender and just want to sit with the love of my life in my arms and just tell her how much she means to me...and how much she has changed my world..the happiness she has brought to me..made me appreciate love and all its tenderneess..just look in her eyes and see the lovenow my friend that look in her eyes can only be caused by the poetry of your soul! well done!

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:06 PM
I wrote this when I was 16 or so, for a girl that didn't even know my name.... how sad is that?

It was raining again today,

Soaking me to the bone.

Surrounded by people,

But still all alone.

When will I see the sun?

When will it be alright?

I’m tired of me,

I need you tonight.

A voice on the phone,

An email or two,

Is not enough,

I need to have you.

There is an ache in my heart,

That I never knew,

Before we first spoke,

Until I met you.

Now there is nothing,

Without your love true,

I am fading to shadow,

Without the light that is you.

Please hurry back to me,

and save my lost soul!

For only in your arms,

Can I ever be whole!

Lena
03-06-2006, 10:07 PM
Well I am not much of a poet so that means no poem.
However there are times when I feel tender and just want to sit with the love of my life in my arms and just tell her how much she means to me...and how much she has changed my world..the happiness she has brought to me..made me appreciate love and all its tenderneess..just look in her eyes and see the love
awwwww that is just lovely Belfast!!!
It just perfect!!!

belfast
03-06-2006, 10:08 PM
Well thank you..I appreciate that


awwwww that is just lovely Belfast!!!
It just perfect!!!

sweet
03-06-2006, 10:12 PM
I wrote this when I was 16 or so, for a girl that didn't even know my name.... how sad is that?

It was raining again today,

Soaking me to the bone.

Surrounded by people,

But still all alone.

When will I see the sun?

When will it be alright?

I’m tired of me,

I need you tonight.

A voice on the phone,

An email or two,

Is not enough,

I need to have you.

There is an ache in my heart,

That I never knew,

Before we first spoke,

Until I met you.

Now there is nothing,

Without your love true,

I am fading to shadow,

Without the light that is you.

Please hurry back to me,

and save my lost soul!

For only in your arms,

Can I ever be whole!

Wow! That was great! You certainly are one talented man. I loved it. :kk

Lena
03-06-2006, 10:13 PM
I wrote this when I was 16 or so, for a girl that didn't even know my name.... how sad is that?
!
awwww that is lovely!!!
She was a lucky girl!!!

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:14 PM
Wow! That was great! You certainly are one talented man. I loved it. :kksweetheart thats the work of a horny, dorky, outcast, frustrated teenage boy, can't say it ever got better! but thanks!:kk

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:15 PM
awwww that is lovely!!!
She was a lucky girl!!!lol yeah! she never even said hello to me! she was lucky!:lmao wait till I win the oscar!!!:lmao:lmao

sweet
03-06-2006, 10:16 PM
sweetheart thats the work of a horny, dorky, outcast, frustrated teenage boy, can't say it ever got better! but thanks!:kk

Still, it was very good. I enjoyed it.

Lena
03-06-2006, 10:16 PM
Well thank you..I appreciate that
Well its true!! It was my pleasure!!!

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:17 PM
Still, it was very good. I enjoyed it.I bow before your judgement! for in truth you must be more blessed with the knowledge of beauty then I for do you not gaze upon it every morning in your blessed mirror?

Lena
03-06-2006, 10:19 PM
lol yeah! she never even said hello to me! she was lucky!:lmao wait till I win the oscar!!!:lmao:lmao
Well it was her lost!!!!
I think it was great!!
yes wait till you win that oscar!!!!

sweet
03-06-2006, 10:19 PM
I bow before your judgement! for in truth you must be more blessed with the knowledge of beauty then I for do you not gaze upon it every morning in your blessed mirror?

You're too kind. :kk

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:21 PM
created the thread cause I am just in one of my moods....
just feeling kind of poetic.

Lena
03-06-2006, 10:23 PM
created the thread cause I am just in one of my moods....
just feeling kind of poetic.
And it is a very good thread!!!
Thank you!

belfast
03-06-2006, 10:23 PM
Get that way my self ..it is a nice mood though isn't it


created the thread cause I am just in one of my moods....
just feeling kind of poetic.

bonzzz4292
03-06-2006, 10:25 PM
well thank you very much, i just got slapped for not being as poetic.

so i will pass the hitting on to you:nu . lol

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:27 PM
ask me after class.... I can slip you some cheat sheets!well thank you very much, i just got slapped for not being as poetic.

so i will pass the hitting on to you:nu . lol

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:34 PM
Alas, once more do I realize that the light which shines upon my world has been taken from me... what shall I do? For without the sweetness that is her voice there are no birds singing in the trees, without the fragrance of her hair caressing my pillow no fresh spring breeze,and without her smile no sun to warm my heart!

Lena
03-06-2006, 10:36 PM
Alas, once more do I realize that the light which shines upon my world has been taken from me... what shall I do? For without the sweetness that is her voice there are no birds singing in the trees, without the fragrance of her hair caressing my pillow no fresh spring breeze,and without her smile no sun to warm my heart!
awwwww how lovely that is!!
Wish i was the one!!!:)

Jy
03-06-2006, 10:40 PM
Holy hell! Cute, intelligent, and writes like Frost?! This guy is a gem...:kk

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:43 PM
Holy hell! Cute, intelligent, and writes like Frost?! This guy is a gem...:kkTo be inspired is to be driven.... When the light shines forth shall we bind our eyes and continue to stumble in darkness?
NO! We shall open our eyes and accept the truth that is the essence of life! With love we are complete, and through it we are able to be whole and become the next incrnation of the human soul.... with out it we are just.... politicians.

sweet
03-06-2006, 10:50 PM
Alas, once more do I realize that the light which shines upon my world has been taken from me... what shall I do? For without the sweetness that is her voice there are no birds singing in the trees, without the fragrance of her hair caressing my pillow no fresh spring breeze,and without her smile no sun to warm my heart!

What a lucky girl!

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:52 PM
What a lucky girl!hmmm, did I mention a girl???

sweet
03-06-2006, 10:56 PM
hmmm, did I mention a girl???

What I meant by that was, the lady who gets to listen to your beautiful words everyday is very lucky.

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:56 PM
Holy hell! Cute, intelligent, and writes like Frost?! This guy is a gem...:kkso then you would be a Frost fan? am not up to date on my Frost... will have to brush up.

bonzzz4292
03-06-2006, 10:56 PM
well it would be nice if you shared your plans so i do not get slapped








ask me after class.... I can slip you some cheat sheets!

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:57 PM
What I meant by that was, the lady who gets to listen to your beautiful words everyday is very lucky.lol dear, that is the purpose of this thread! No one in my daily life CARES if I can write this stuff!

Jy
03-06-2006, 10:57 PM
Frost, Whitman, Blake, to name a few. And now Zif...:kk

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:57 PM
well it would be nice if you shared your plans so i do not get slappedyou love it and you know it you knink master you!:lmao

Zifnab
03-06-2006, 10:58 PM
Frost, Whitman, Blake, to name a few. And now Zif...:kkI feel I am more inspired by the works of the immortal bard. his works cover so much more than the tragic plays we all know so well...

sweet
03-06-2006, 11:00 PM
lol dear, that is the purpose of this thread! No one in my daily life CARES if I can write this stuff!

Well that's a shame :(

Jy
03-06-2006, 11:01 PM
True, his sonnets make me weepy. Very hearfelt.I feel I am more inspired by the works of the immortal bard. his works cover so much more than the tragic plays we all know so well...

cuddles
03-06-2006, 11:08 PM
hey zif and belfast pretty darn good the both of you ill be waiting on your book with an autograft please ;) :wa: :)

Zifnab
03-07-2006, 12:28 AM
hey zif and belfast pretty darn good the both of you ill be waiting on your book with an autograft please ;) :wa: :)My dear, with out you there could be no book, for the glimpse of a slight turn of your ankle beneath the hem of your dress doth cause the heart to skip a beat, and the mind to wander those paths it should not traverse! Oh be still my beating heart for what can we ever hope to offer that could turn the head of one so sweet enough to grace us with just a smile???

Sandy
03-07-2006, 12:29 AM
pretty cool zif.

Zifnab
03-07-2006, 09:09 AM
thank you. I seem to have my moments...

cuddles
03-07-2006, 02:57 PM
aaaah zif im here im here:kk

Barkiss
03-07-2006, 02:59 PM
Damn Zif...you're making me a little shaky in the knees...

Zifnab
03-07-2006, 03:00 PM
aaaah zif im here im here:kkThe sun doth once more fight through the darkness of my lowly existance, to warm the desolate places of my heart!

Zifnab
03-07-2006, 03:01 PM
Damn Zif...you're making me a little shaky in the knees...Alas my secret now tis known! for twas always thee that hast insipred my words!

Sandy
03-07-2006, 03:02 PM
i like that one.

Zifnab
03-07-2006, 03:03 PM
i like that one.thanks, was hard pressed on that, was caught off gaurd!

Sandy
03-07-2006, 03:05 PM
well off gaurd or not, that was good.

Barkiss
03-07-2006, 03:08 PM
Alas my secret now tis known! for twas always thee that hast insipred my words!

No sir..you are an artist...I'm a mere babble mouth..

Zifnab
03-07-2006, 03:12 PM
No sir..you are an artist...I'm a mere babble mouth..I thank you for your gracious words! And do humbly remind any reader that I do accept rep points!:wa:

Sandy
03-07-2006, 03:13 PM
lol your a trip zif. :lmao

Zifnab
03-07-2006, 03:19 PM
lol your a trip zif. :lmaoI am so glad I actually started this thread cause I am having SO MUCH FUN with it! I can't remember when I have felt so creatively alive in a LOOOONG time! Thanks to all that have visited and keep me going!

pastryman
03-07-2006, 03:29 PM
wow Zif, truly amazing you almost got me to cry to

G...G
03-07-2006, 03:35 PM
Can I get in that tub with you? Looks very inviting!!!!!

Zifnab
03-07-2006, 03:36 PM
wow Zif, truly amazing you almost got me to cry towell gee! now I am a nice rosey red!
I am pleased that you enjoyed my lines, and can only hope that I may continue to bring enjoyment to those that choose to read the words, but I am not alone! everyone is invited to post as well! PLEASE!!! thank you!

Zifnab
03-09-2006, 08:08 PM
I sit here in the quiet stillness of the warm night, feeling you breathe so gently against my chest. You are so delicate and lovely as you lay sleeping peacefully, snuggled into me. The movie ended over an hour ago, but I haven’t the heart to wake you. You have had such a difficult week, and sleep has not come easy. It is for moments like these that I wait. The few precious moments when there is nothing but you in the world, no phones, no tv, no traffic, just you. I could stay in this moment forever and know that there is a heaven.

I have watched you sleeping long enough to memorize every line and curve of your face.

I could sculpt it even if I were blind. It is the one thing I should miss most if I were to lose my sight. But as with all great moments, its time must end, and as you stir and begin to wake the moment fades away to join the others in the special place reserved in my heart just for you!

tiger50
03-09-2006, 09:08 PM
I tend to wax poetic every now and again, and have noticed that I am not alone in this. There have been some very well writen lines in these threads, and so I thought perhaps they should have a place of there own. No Tiger, not dirty limericks, but for those times when the mood hits, a place to let loose the creative side of our personality, that often languishes, locked inside waiting to be free....
Give it a shot and we'll see what happens.

awww shit.... i cant play???? bugger

aw well i'll play along the

only ever wrote one poem.... this is it....

it's the morning of your life and all of your dreams are just beginning
may you touch the fire flies and stars....dance with the fairies and talk to the man in the moon.......
may you find love ....and gracious hearts..and people who care.....
welcome to your new life....
the world has been waiting for you......

Sandy
03-09-2006, 09:13 PM
hey guys both of those are great. :wa:

G...G
03-09-2006, 09:16 PM
I agree!!!

Zifnab
03-09-2006, 09:26 PM
I'm going to use his! Tiger that was great! better than your limmericks by a mile!:55

Zifnab
03-12-2006, 06:15 PM
Hark! What joy doth fill my breast! For once more didst I glimpse her face! A face like unto an angel, an angel descended from on high that I may be lifted up by her very presence.
Ah would that I could follow where she leads, for e'en if her path doth traverse the firey floors of Hades itself would I follow, just for the chance to recieve the grace of her smile!

sweetgapeach
03-12-2006, 06:26 PM
awww shit.... i cant play???? bugger

aw well i'll play along the

only ever wrote one poem.... this is it....

it's the morning of your life and all of your dreams are just beginning
may you touch the fire flies and stars....dance with the fairies and talk to the man in the moon.......
may you find love ....and gracious hearts..and people who care.....
welcome to your new life....
the world has been waiting for you......



Wow !! Great Tiger !!

Zifnab
03-24-2006, 10:48 PM
I was sitting on my usual park bench again today, rather aimlessly reading a magazine, when I became aware of a scent, floating on the breeze. I can not tell you the name of the fragrance, but I know it as yours. I heard a woman’s voice laughing beyond the bushes behind me, and knew it was you. Just then the sun broke through the clouds and right on me. I felt the warmth and knew it was you hugging me. A song is drifting across the park, it is our song.

I love this bench. It is our place. It is where we share the most wonderful moments of my days. On some days I can sit here and close my eyes and feel you sitting beside me. My eyes stay closed as I enjoy every second of our time together, because if I open them I will be alone once more, and I have felt that pain too often. With them closed all the world is perfect! You have shared this bench and my dreams

I do not know who you are, but I know you are out there, perhaps waiting for me to find you. If only you could send me a sign! Some clue to lead me to you!

G...G
03-25-2006, 12:21 AM
I wrote this when I was 16 or so, for a girl that didn't even know my name.... how sad is that?

It was raining again today,

Soaking me to the bone.

Surrounded by people,

But still all alone.

When will I see the sun?

When will it be alright?

I’m tired of me,

I need you tonight.

A voice on the phone,

An email or two,

Is not enough,

I need to have you.

There is an ache in my heart,

That I never knew,

Before we first spoke,

Until I met you.

Now there is nothing,

Without your love true,

I am fading to shadow,

Without the light that is you.

Please hurry back to me,

and save my lost soul!

For only in your arms,

Can I ever be whole!

I'M IMPRESSED

Aubree
03-25-2006, 02:05 AM
Zifnab, I am charmed by your writing. Thank you for this feeling.

tiger50
03-25-2006, 02:21 AM
Zifnab, I am charmed by your writing. Thank you for this feeling.

gday aubree, owya goin babe???:wa:

Norfolkdave
03-25-2006, 06:26 AM
Zif is a wonderous writer, a king amongst the Gods, an echo of the past seated in the chambers of the great walls of mount Edna. A trace of a vision high in the clouds, his verbality is like Robin of Sherwood, His grace of knowledge like the seven wonders of the world, Full of bullshit.

tiger50
03-25-2006, 06:54 AM
Zif is a wonderous writer, a king amongst the Gods, an echo of the past seated in the chambers of the great walls of mount Edna. A trace of a vision high in the clouds, his verbality is like Robin of Sherwood, His grace of knowledge like the seven wonders of the world, Full of bullshit.
yep i concur.. see the fairy fart... :D

Aubree
03-25-2006, 10:28 AM
Good morning Tiger - could have used you last night - my loss

tiger50
03-25-2006, 10:30 AM
Good morning Tiger - could have used you last night - my loss
used?? OMG, nooooo.. i ave youth an innamasense.. :whee:

Aubree
03-25-2006, 10:32 AM
1

tiger50
03-25-2006, 10:34 AM
Used and abused - sorry but I was in that kind of mood.

lol hey its all good.. an ur in tha shit, nevva say sorri ta me... a ead job will cure all... :D :whee: :lmao

Aubree
03-25-2006, 10:40 AM
head job hmmmmmmmmm cyber? Whats your second choice?

GeekMaster
03-25-2006, 10:43 AM
Used and abused - sorry but I was in that kind of mood.

Hello Aubree

I specialize in helping ladies remove those undesirable moods. I am available for consultation most any time.

Just let me know if I can be of assistance.;)

tiger50
03-25-2006, 10:54 AM
head job hmmmmmmmmm cyber? Whats your second choice?
umm spredin vegimite on clits an avvin a good likkin.. :whee:

sweetgapeach
03-25-2006, 10:55 AM
I.......

I want to have u in my life
My dreams at night are you, as my earth
Come let me hold u, hold u tight
Late at night in the middle of a moonlit night

You've tinted my life with joy and gladness
You've chased away my pain and sadness

Can't help but sleep with you on my mind
Without your sweet words, my heart is blind
Come my angel, come take control
Come drown in my heart, let me burn in your soul

"You'll never be alone, I will always be there."
I think not to live without you near, I must feel and hear you

I lay in the darkness of my lonely room
I miss you my love, like a nightless moon
My eyes are yearning, my mental is churning, my heart turns blue
I hope some day my dreams will come true

Sandy
03-25-2006, 10:58 AM
cool sweet, i really like that. :wa:

sweetgapeach
03-25-2006, 10:59 AM
cool sweet, i really like that. :wa:



Thank you ~~:wa:

Jy
03-25-2006, 11:36 AM
We have such talented members here!! Thank you Zif and Peach for sharing a bit of your hearts with us.

Norfolkdave
03-25-2006, 01:35 PM
Good morning Tiger - could have used you last night - my loss

OMG, Tiger used, we,d never hear the end of it, :wa: His sausage would have been well and truly banged.

sweet
03-25-2006, 01:43 PM
I.......

I want to have u in my life
My dreams at night are you, as my earth
Come let me hold u, hold u tight
Late at night in the middle of a moonlit night

You've tinted my life with joy and gladness
You've chased away my pain and sadness

Can't help but sleep with you on my mind
Without your sweet words, my heart is blind
Come my angel, come take control
Come drown in my heart, let me burn in your soul

"You'll never be alone, I will always be there."
I think not to live without you near, I must feel and hear you

I lay in the darkness of my lonely room
I miss you my love, like a nightless moon
My eyes are yearning, my mental is churning, my heart turns blue
I hope some day my dreams will come true

Wow hun. That was absolutely beautiful. Really touched me on a personal level. Thank you for posting this :wa:

Norfolkdave
03-25-2006, 01:52 PM
A world were life true meaning has little value
Patience has no virtue
Peace and Harmony are non-existent
Hatred and despair is of greatest value
A world were love, sharing and caring should over flow
With giving and trust
An abundance of kindness should be of good for all
But all you have left is a broken spirit and a wounded heart
Is there anyone left who cares? And who you can trust?
With creativity and true expression, peace and harmony
With wisdom gained is strength that is achieved
Use caution to the wind for ignorance is their bliss
They will not know when or how to receive
Continue on your path to find your destiny
Use the utmost caution how it is you proceed
Believe in your intuition it will never lie
And share with all your greatest gifts without condition
Doing this you will find your special friend
A special friend that will guide you to that sacred place
A place that is yours and only yours alone
To meet your child within
Remember to reach out and accept it
Remember to embrace it, and nurture it
For it is young and hurt
But this is the key and all your questions will be answered
And watch to truth unfold
Before you know it your broken spirit and your wounded heart
Will be have peace and harmony
You will have reached the end of your of your journey and have your destiny
Spread your wings and fly
At last you will be set free

Zifnab
03-25-2006, 08:37 PM
nice stuff from some nice folks. Thanks to Dave and Peach.

I thought I would post some words from a friend of mine...

The years speed by
Remorselessly,
Each bearing a fragment of our past,
Like broken glass.
And so do we.

One day upon another treads
Unceasingly,
Like sheep with undistinguishable heads
Crowding together
One on another.
And so do we.

Minute by minute
Uncountably,
Like raindrops upon the horizon's limit
Or waves of the sea,
Our short lives pass imperceptibly.
And so do we.

Against the advancing, bracing tide
Our love shall stand
On beaches unfathomably wide
Where shell heaps on shell and sand meets sand,
With towering cliffs that the elements hide
And lines of waves that the waves efface,

Yet shall our footsteps together trace
A path as we travel it hand in hand,
That vast immeasurable strand,
Planting a kiss upon its face,
One for you and yet one for me
Defiantly.
So shall it be.



Bill Shakespeare

meandyouido
03-26-2006, 04:09 AM
your smell still lingers even these years later, my heart races every time i see your shadow and i turn and i wake. your were mine you are mine and i will live my life for those moments we never realy had, and then i wake.

Norfolkdave
03-26-2006, 06:10 AM
Nice one zif nice one

sweetgapeach
04-30-2006, 12:10 PM
Thinking of you

You're the first thing I think of
Each morning when I rise
You're the last thing I think of
When I close my eyes

You're in each thought I have
And every breath I take
My feelings are growing stronger
With every move you make

You're an angel from above
who takes away my pain
My love for you is so strong
It's always just the same

You're the miracle in my life
Who can always make me smile
Just knowing that you care
Makes my life worth-while

You've touched my heart and soul
Which you have from the start
Your warm soft words
Will never leave my heart

You are everything I want
You're so pure and true
I love you with everything I have
And I love everything that you do

sweetgapeach
04-30-2006, 12:11 PM
I wrote this when I was 16 or so, for a girl that didn't even know my name.... how sad is that?

It was raining again today,

Soaking me to the bone.

Surrounded by people,

But still all alone.

When will I see the sun?

When will it be alright?

I’m tired of me,

I need you tonight.

A voice on the phone,

An email or two,

Is not enough,

I need to have you.

There is an ache in my heart,

That I never knew,

Before we first spoke,

Until I met you.

Now there is nothing,

Without your love true,

I am fading to shadow,

Without the light that is you.

Please hurry back to me,

and save my lost soul!

For only in your arms,

Can I ever be whole!


Good Poem ! You wrote when you were 16 , I am amazed that they knew what E Mail meant !! Good job !!

G...G
05-01-2006, 10:58 AM
All I can say is :lmao :lmao :lmao



Good Poem ! You wrote when you were 16 , I am amazed that they knew what E Mail meant !! Good job !!

tess
05-16-2006, 02:51 AM
Life is an adventure.

It's not the destination
we reach thats most rewarding.
It's the journey along the way.

Norfolkdave
05-16-2006, 04:54 AM
If I have kissed you once,
I have kissed you 1000 times.

Each morning as I arise.
Each night as I drift to sleep.
Each hour of every day.
Each moment before it goes away.

The kisses shared between you and I,
Have many times reached the sky.
As your lips part and anxiousness increases,
Your heart pounds and breathing ceases.

My lips leap to yours hungry for the taste.
Sweetness drips from you to me
As desire grows, my heart races.
Inches apart seem as miles waiting.

The miles increase as space shortens.
Time appears to stand still.
So close yet so far.
When? Now, please now?

Once more, 1001.
Make it 2, so many more.
Caressing ever caressing those
Tender lips, each time as the first.

If I have kissed you 1000 times,
I would give them all away
To make the dream a reality,
And kiss you once.