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Black Water

Posted 04-12-2013 at 08:16 AM by *Brad*
Night the death of dismal day
Release repeating agony
Black empty void without demand
Soothe the nerves, their ragged rant
Calm the frantic racing mind
In dark oblivion solace find
Count backwards as the senses fall
Hear the black sea’s whispering call

Forget the disappointing curse
The hopes and longings that disperse
Each day a page torn from the book
Ground hog days the same course took
Dream of demons fiercely fought
Break the wheel out of the rut
Black water floats away your cares
Drift now from the conscious shores
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tink062570's Avatar
Very insightful and a reflection of some inner demons i believe
Posted 04-12-2013 at 08:29 AM by tink062570 tink062570 is offline
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artemis's Avatar
Very cool... The second part is very Tagore-esque.
Posted 04-13-2013 at 03:34 AM by artemis artemis is offline
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redwing's Avatar
Beautiful poem B, hope it's not a reflection of how you feel, very dark
Posted 04-13-2013 at 04:44 AM by redwing redwing is offline
 
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