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Shades of Green

Posted 10-18-2018 at 09:33 AM by *Brad*
Thinking of us, while on my trip
Two picture puzzles life has set
Sending pieces to each other
wrapped in string
wrapped in leather
Held then to the light and read
Shades of green or maybe blue
Rotated by a varied phrasing
Is this true, this point of view?
Uneven furrows ploughed by living
Grooving deep your skin and soul
I like to run my fingertip
along the ridges you disclose
Feel the shiver of your knowing
a hand is in the river bed
carved by passion's flow
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hijiller's Avatar
Brad! You wrote a poem! Tight, focussed, consistant imagery..

Wow, great job!
Posted 10-18-2018 at 08:41 PM by hijiller hijiller is offline
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Thanks Jill I have an image of you, tightly focussed … red correcting pen in hand … being slightly surprised .. just kidding .. I really appreciate your comments
Posted 10-19-2018 at 08:46 AM by *Brad* *Brad* is offline
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Atrebla Rose's Avatar
Excellent!
Posted 10-27-2018 at 10:59 AM by Atrebla Rose Atrebla Rose is offline
 
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