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Contours

Posted 04-16-2013 at 07:31 AM by *Brad*
Updated 01-03-2015 at 05:01 PM by *Brad*
Evening sky
Indigo and violet
Feathered breeze upon your cheek
White foam drifting in a line
Dune grass sighing, scent of brine
Murmurs, rumours of the night
Curved horizon burning bright
Contrast of the light and dark
Contrast of the near and far
Memories whisper in your ear
Lonely star, lonely shore
A mist is rising, evening’s mask
Contours fading in the dusk
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Reminds me of parts of my childhood spent travelling in Jordan... The sands of Jordan are of all colors...

This poem is lovely...
Posted 04-16-2013 at 08:14 AM by artemis artemis is offline
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Lovely. I'd like to be on that beach, allowing my senses to just absorb everything.
Posted 04-16-2013 at 05:58 PM by redcat redcat is offline
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Wow where to start
White foam drifting in a line - loved this and
A mist is rising, evening’s mask
Really good, I visualized it in my head, the clouds, breeze, setting sun, evening star very nice, a favourite for sure
Posted 04-16-2013 at 06:52 PM by redwing redwing is offline
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Wow, this really brought back memories of home, Now I'm sad...home seems so far away.
Posted 04-20-2013 at 09:18 AM by HIboy HIboy is offline
 
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